I Cried to The Birds

I Cried to The Birds

I sat by the shore for a year and a day
waiting and singing my heart turning grey
knowing the thought that you cannot return
dims now the flame that between us did burn
the birds cried with anguish and longing regret
the sea sighed and shuddered it cannot forget
my sweetest of souls was drawn down to the deeps
my sweetest of souls now I sit here and weep

This another poem with The Birds Cried, and we saw you founder x

Reviews

[Richielee]

beautifully done and perfectly metered as well,i especially liked line 6

[A.D. Wilson]

This piece reminds me of a woman mourning a fisherman husband lost at sea. Very tragic and beautiful.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I love these pieces Jeremy

[yelena]

What a gem here, it reads like a lyrics to a nostalgic ballad. Enjoyed very much. :)