After DeathA Poem by JeremiahhBeating in slow motion, your heart takes in it's last breath. Crumbling from the notion that the news was of a death.
A love like no other that no other shall feel, a husband and a brother like a nightmare, surreal.
He'll forever be missed, and his spirit will live on. But the pressure slit his wrists so now his life and respect are gone. © 2010 Jeremiahh |
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Added on November 28, 2010 Last Updated on November 28, 2010 AuthorJeremiahhBakersfield, CAAboutHey! My name's Jeremiah and I heard this was I great place to improve your writing skills. I'm a complete noob so any constructive criticism would be very much appreciated! :] Thanks! more..Writing
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