After Death

After Death

A Poem by Jeremiahh

Beating in slow motion,

your heart takes in it's last breath.

Crumbling from the notion

that the news was of a death.

 

A love like no other

that no other shall feel,

a husband and a brother

like a nightmare, surreal.

 

He'll forever be missed,

and his spirit will live on.

But the pressure slit his wrists

so now his life and respect are gone.

© 2010 Jeremiahh


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Added on November 28, 2010
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Jeremiahh
Jeremiahh

Bakersfield, CA



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