Dying Hope

Dying Hope

A Poem by Jeremiahh

Too much of a bend

will only cause a break.

Now the heart cannot mend;

now the love will not wake.

 

Ceasing from existence,

warmth can no longer spread.

Fading in the distance,

hope will soon be dead.

© 2010 Jeremiahh


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Added on November 28, 2010
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Jeremiahh
Jeremiahh

Bakersfield, CA



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