Envious EyesA Poem by JeremiahhEnvious eyes spot perfectly paired hearts loving as their evening endures.
These eyes go on seeing what would continue seeming to be the same pair of hearts again and again. Wanting nothing from them, but wishing to share in the joy.
But no comfort will come to put these eyes at ease. For the beholder sees not the beauty of the world that is presented especially for them.
Cursed by the pain of a thousand broken hearts, these eyes shall forever be envious. © 2011 Jeremiahh |
StatsAuthorJeremiahhBakersfield, CAAboutHey! My name's Jeremiah and I heard this was I great place to improve your writing skills. I'm a complete noob so any constructive criticism would be very much appreciated! :] Thanks! more..Writing
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