The Night's Moon

The Night's Moon

A Poem by Jeremiahh

Like the moon reflecting the sun's light, brightening up my night.

When I see your love, I am reminded only of her,

the true source of my light.

Much too far for me to reach.

Hoping that one day, the sun will breach.

But for now I must be satisfied with the night's moon to light my sky.

If the moon only knew, it would surely cry.

So as genuine as possible my love must seem,

until my warming sun can be redeemed.

© 2010 Jeremiahh


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I like this. I can relate to some parts of it. Please keep going.

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Added on November 19, 2010
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Jeremiahh
Jeremiahh

Bakersfield, CA



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