The Night's MoonA Poem by JeremiahhLike the moon reflecting the sun's light, brightening up my night. When I see your love, I am reminded only of her, the true source of my light. Much too far for me to reach. Hoping that one day, the sun will breach. But for now I must be satisfied with the night's moon to light my sky. If the moon only knew, it would surely cry. So as genuine as possible my love must seem, until my warming sun can be redeemed. © 2010 Jeremiahh |
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1 Review Added on November 19, 2010 Last Updated on November 25, 2010 AuthorJeremiahhBakersfield, CAAboutHey! My name's Jeremiah and I heard this was I great place to improve your writing skills. I'm a complete noob so any constructive criticism would be very much appreciated! :] Thanks! more..Writing
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