Defense

Defense

A Poem by Jeremiahh

Tearing down the walls,
breaching perimeters,
only with unknowing help is this possible.
Never would one intentionally allow someone to get this close.
But never the less the distance between the enemy and self decreases.
Only until the last line of defense has been broken down
does the attacker fully see what they've broken through to.
This realization causes them to flee.
Leaving one with broken walls.
Time to reconstruct.

© 2010 Jeremiahh


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This makes me wonder on what the attackers actually found... Well that's in a literal sense I suppose. In any case I find this interesting. Keep up the good work...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 19, 2010
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Jeremiahh
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