.:: If you could read my mind the story you would see::.

.:: If you could read my mind the story you would see::.

A Poem by Flapjack
"

.:: I love you Hikaru::.

"

As her body tense up in the flickering candle light


Her lips quiver asking

"Is this a mistake?"  As her mirror answers "Its quiet alright."

Her body can't help but falter

As the moment is slowly picking up the pace

And shes begging to be drawn in

By this crazed filled sweet talking

Of the girl who pierced her heart.

Her body craves for her deeply ,

As she winces up to the lust soaked filled eyes

And closed her lashes to feel

The wet surge the long wish surprise.

"Its not satisfying if I cannot wipe away your tears."

She coos softly

As the girl begins crying

Knowing deep down

This is a mistake one which

She cannot run from

One she doesn't want to escape

Swept away in emotions

Shaking with rejoice

But now angered by this conclusion

That this is not the right choice.

As her body shivers and grows in stenght

She sits up slowly from her place

And envelops her body

Around her lost reflection waist, holding her closely hoping maybe

This time

This love

Wouldn't be a mistake.

No matter where you go no matter what you do

We'll never be apart...

Because I love you


 

© 2009 Flapjack


Author's Note

Flapjack
.::Please no grammar comments I can't spell for shyt let alone use proper grammar. I write to express my feelings and i hope they semi go through. lemme know what you think::.

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Interesting piece. It's very thought provoking, and slightly confusing, but in a good way somehow. I loved it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ano kyouya-kun I can't make a reason why I love it but I just do it hit's a spot somewhere in my odd little heart. and maybe I did bookmark it you'll never know.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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