A Wall of Feelings

A Wall of Feelings

A Poem by Jennifer K
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When you love someone but you don't want to

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Is it bad that I already miss you
That I already crave your touch 
This is a feeling that's all new
I have never felt this much

Feelings create walls around me 
And I am trapped inside
But they aren't here to protect me
These walls won't help me hide 

These walls show me emotion 
They should me smiles and tears
Yet they can't be removed in any motion
These walls are up for years

It was you who put up this wall
And only you can knock them down
Too bad I can't give you a call
Because you will never stick around 

You left when times got tough
And I drowned in my sorrow
But you'd think I would've had enough
Even though I would take you back tomorrow

They tell me to stay strong
To never let you back in
WIthout you, it feels so wrong
Like I'm living my life a sin

They tell us that sin is bad
ANd it's the worst thing we can do
So why should I still be glad
That I wouldn't hesitate to love you 

-Jennifer Kurack

© 2014 Jennifer K


Author's Note

Jennifer K
sorry it is bad
its my first one

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"They tell me to stay strong
To never let you back in
Without you, it feels so wrong
Like I'm living my life a sin."
These lines conclude all your feelings well done It's really good I liked the way you expressed your emotions.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jennifer K

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Wow.. This is so powerful. It hit me right in the heart. I think I understand the feeling well.. Please keep writing, there is obviously so much emotion and potential within you. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jennifer K

10 Years Ago

thank you holly :)
This is a very heartfelt poem. I know how it feels to cling to those walls we build up to keep the pain out. You did an excellent job with expressing the safety those walls bring. Great job! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jennifer K

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for reviewing!
You love your walls, don't you? You also happen to know how to use them very effectively in your poetry. I think this would sound pretty good as a song as well...have you ever thought about songwriting? If not, give it a try, you could be good =)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jennifer K

10 Years Ago

Thanks! And I would try but I don't know how to play a musical instrument haha
Devesh

10 Years Ago

You're welcome! Oh, well, poetry is good too! :)

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Added on February 12, 2014
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