The Good Life

 

The quiet instances...

 

No friends nor foes
watching, talking, listening
for that great sound
a star makes when she's crying;
falling

Reviews

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very nice well written poem/thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Gandré]

that star's energy is still there. soon it will be raising and all will be looking at her. sweet, sweet, Jenny.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Beautiful... how we all need time to ourselves sometimes to collect ourselves and evaluate where we are and where we are going... I couldn't have said it better myself.

[Blackbirdsong]

Sometimes solitude is a good thing since that is usually when we are closest to ourselves and can actually pause and reflect. Now you have me wondering what sound a star makes when it falls...that's a beautiful image.

[Dezaraye]

This is wistful and a little sad. I like the quietness of your words and that they're not rushed. It's really pretty.

[RHEA CROSLEY]

It is very artistic expression. I think its need especially now that we know all stars have there own song. Thanks for this expression that is so beautiful.