Good, Then I Am A Writer

I wrote this because as a writer, any reaction is better than none.

Do the lines I write sometimes
make you shudder
as the winds of truth
blow your reflection
into fragments;

Pieces of your inner workings
exposed
forcing you to look at yourself
in the light of day?

Do my thoughts threaten
your reality
rocking your very core
into realms since
unrecognized;

Like a built-in light
inside
your compact mirror, magnifying
blemishes on your world?

Good, then I am a writer.

 

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

I got to hear you read this live so that makes it even better. I can still hear your voice saying the words. I think this hold so much truth and wisdom in it that it speaks a truth all it's own that no one can deny. You are a bad a*s writer and I will tell that to anyone that dares to ask. Kept up the great work.


Well Done!!!!!!

[Dezaraye]

You are a writer! I really like this piece. This is what a good poem or story should make you feel ... among many other things. I love the way you've expressed this short, sweet, and to the point. It's powerful.

[Forest Green]

Very confident and inspiring approach to being a writer. It is worth the effort to stir things up a little bit and make some hay...

Nice words. You do the topic poetic justice.

Excellent.

Daniel

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Nicely done! You're definetly a writer, no question. Enjoyed this very much.


Great Write!