I got to hear you read this live so that makes it even better. I can still hear your voice saying the words. I think this hold so much truth and wisdom in it that it speaks a truth all it's own that no one can deny. You are a bad a*s writer and I will tell that to anyone that dares to ask. Kept up the great work.
I like this one ALOT! It ideally expresses the power of the pen..."mightier than the sword." Ahh to have command of the language...to form pictures, and thoughts, and emotions! How great is that!! I love that you relish in this. Great write- awesome flow.
~Lorraiyne
You know, I was just jumping about here...searching for something readable, long since having given up the habit of sticking with a piece no matter how poorly done, no matter how inept, illiterate, ill conceived, banal, cliche!
Having long zipped, up, up and away at first light, first verse, phrase I lit upon your piece. Lo! I braked! A poem. A piece of worthy verse! Lo! Who harkens here? And I looked. Ah! Jenny Davis. And so it was. No accident.
Again, very nice. One comment, if I may? You don't need the last line. It is understood. More than implied. And................................you are. No need to state it. (Read it to yourself without it. See!)
GA
I got to hear you read this live so that makes it even better. I can still hear your voice saying the words. I think this hold so much truth and wisdom in it that it speaks a truth all it's own that no one can deny. You are a bad a*s writer and I will tell that to anyone that dares to ask. Kept up the great work.
woah yeah you defffffly are a writer... i really enjoyed it and i dont usually like it when people write about writing you know what i mean??? Like when people talk about how to write and stuff like that i usually get bored but this was pretty good... You even sound confident in this maybe a little cocky like you have a swagger and i liked that!!
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