When The Sunlight Hits A Window

When The Sunlight Hits A Window

A Poem by Jenny Davis


 

It's the time of day
when sunlight hits a window;
creating a stage for dust and shadow


Tiny particles, dancing
competing for space; and time in the spotlight


Everything's brighter
as if God hits a light switch;
inspecting His children's rooms


Wise eyes searching
wondering; why complex clutters simple


Then a cheese cloth cloud
wipes away the coruscation;
blocking out the new view


Gray hands, covering
thinking; "That's enough magic for today"

© 2008 Jenny Davis


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This is just gorgeous...only you could make dust particles seem magical. I love that time of day myself. You can see all the little things you don't normally see and the light has a special quality then too. Its like we're meant to have that time for reflection each day.

this definitely goes in my favorites :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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This is just gorgeous...only you could make dust particles seem magical. I love that time of day myself. You can see all the little things you don't normally see and the light has a special quality then too. Its like we're meant to have that time for reflection each day.

this definitely goes in my favorites :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Lovely how magic can appear when we least expect it, what words you use I am impressed Jenny Davis!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I love this. That's exactly how I feel right now... enough magic for today. LOL Such beauty you share with us. Thank you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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