Goodbye

Take it all away in a dream,
leave me be and let me fly


For I


Wish you well in all you do,
time does that to a soul


So behold


The true meaning of forgiveness,
not a passive sigh


Why


To increase pain is trivial,
unbecoming of true spirits


This gift it's...


Amazingly clear and white,
see it and smile someday 
 

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

Wow what a powerful message in so few words. You conveyed so much here a call of independences and the unentanglement of something like a freeing of the soul to meet the heart in the purest of places. I really dug this. I loved the way it flowed and the way it worked itself together so seamlessly.


Great Job!!!!!!

[Brenda Sue]

Beautifully penned. Wonderful write.

[An Ordinary Woman]

Oh Go U! This is wonderfully peaceful and serene, so nice...... My timing must have been perfect tonight, I opened my page and lo and behold here it was!! I enjoyed it :+)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

This is indeed a fond farewell, tinged with sadness, but at least no regret!
Very creatively structured and accompanied with a sympathetic picture makes this an exquisite composition!

Beautiful!

God's Blessing
Phillozofee - (Phill)

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Nice work. Just passing through at this time and getting a Jenny-fix. :)

-Gabe