Her Master Pieces

Her Master Pieces

A Poem by Jenny Davis



Inside a painting she walks,
many colors gracing her feet, 
many hues surrounding.

Red, green, yellow, blue...
Swishes, swirls, smears...
Of life!

Some strokes unkind- 
many diluted with tears,
but inside a canvas she's free;

To create, again and again.

© 2008 Jenny Davis


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To immerse oneself so much in art that it becomes a part of us... that is how we truly create.
I believe time and again humans have disappeared inside the alternate reality of words and music; paint and canvas, only to emerge the victor over inner struggles.

Art is God's gift to the restless, hopeless heart and the promise that we can survive. And you, my friend, are an artist.

Gordon

Posted 17 Years Ago


7 of 7 people found this review constructive.




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Words and images are probably the most freeing elements of the world.

Well done!

Posted 16 Years Ago


beautiful job

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is my dogma of late. It is pure truth. You can't share anything more powerful than truth. Perfection.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with the many viewers before me..i think this is nicely written..it flowed well..and u stated your words so eloquently...i was captured from the opening line..i like the imagery..
"Some strokes unkind-
many diluted with tears,
but inside a canvas she's free;"

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written. Nicely done, Jenny. A truely beautiful piece of art.


Great Write.
Rayne

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

"inside a canvas she's free; "

now doesn't that say it all?

lovely



Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

nice

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is perfect and so wonderful in every way, Jenny. If I could step through a wall of canvas surely this is what it would be like. Your wording here is as near perfect as anything I've ever read. That is saying a lot about your writing, it is nothing less than stunning. ... smiles ...

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You have brought this painting to life, gracing it with an even greater beauty that it originally possessed.
Your piece immerses one in imagery that finds its way to ones spirit. A Beautiful and poignant piece!

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Philosophy in its purest. Wonderful imagery. Great work!

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 11, 2008
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