Beautiful, Lovely

How beautiful the sight,
the sun,
peering through my blue windows.
A delicate delight,
such fun,
chasing away the shadows.




How lovely the sound,
the moon,
dropping in on my day.
Just grazing the ground,
sweet tune,
singing my cares away. 
 

Reviews

[aponijose]

I have to agree with Sue; the piece is delightful. But its Coldplay's Clock's delightful, not uhm... well... Katelyn Tarver's Wonderful Crazy delightful so... yes... I don't think that that's bad.

I'm a big fan of personifications so I'm sure you could understand the appeal of your piece to me. I find it endearing in a sense. It gives the piece a clever and afflicting power to converse with the writer as if the elements placed in the piece - the moon, the sun, etc - was theirs.

And for that, I commend you.

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This was a great piece to start my day with. It has a calm but uplifting feel to it. There is a homey comfort
in it that seems to " singing my cares away. " Great job.
Debby

[Diana Owen Busy with Li..]

beautiful write.

[Ladysue]

A very delightful poem, Jenny. I love the line, Just grazing the ground, sweet tune, singing my cares away.
Beautifully written. :)

[Sean Allen]

Yes, the full moon is beautiful tonight.
This is beautiful and lovely
Donn

[James Watts]

Nice poem. My favorite part was about the moon...never been a day type of person. But I do like sometime daytime stuff. As always your words spark emotion and you have a talent for that nice work.