Roused

Roused

A Poem by Jenny Davis

Roused




Floating down
past rocks of old

Floating up
towards trees of angels

No expectations
anticipations
salvations

Saluting high
the golden pecks of sun

Saluting low
the dark sighs of moon

Not weary
leery
dreary

Spinning wildly
over mountains of dull

Spinning deliberately
under horizons of repose

Never confined
defined
unkind

Seeing more
than stars of stagnant

Seeing you
like gales of August

© 2008 Jenny Davis


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What beauty in words..
This poem is so peaceful to me .. it makes me think peaceful thoughts.

No expectations
anticipations
salvations

Kind of like life.. you just go with the flow and do the best you can and be the best you can..
Now, i may have taken your poem in another direction than you.. i just get this feeling reading it. It seems to be about love and peace and defining beyond.. if this is beyond it is beautiful.

The last line.. 'Seeing you... like gales of August.'
What a beautiful line.

Chloe
xoxo


Posted 17 Years Ago


15 of 15 people found this review constructive.




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So expressive. This work is really powerful.. rich with metaphor. Your work is so graceful, anyway, but this adds strength as well. Cheers.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ummm. That was beautiful to witness as well as read. You words were perfect and felt so inviting and heart warming to embrace. Always a pleasure to travel with your words as a guide. Purely Greatest



Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Beautifulllllllllllllllllllllll, girl you really do have a talent........I love your writing this one had a whimsical feel to it and it flowed brilliantly...nicely done..

Posted 17 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Jenny this is just gorgeous from beginning to end. I love the structure and the sense of falling gently through the heavens. There is a wonderful sense of peace throughout. I would love to hear you read this one. *hint hint*



Posted 17 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

...Spinning deliberately
under horizons of repose...

Great spoken word. This is a strong one... Gordon

Posted 17 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.

loving it! sleepy ride with great visuals. nicely done.

Posted 17 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.

I felt like a feather! how lovely-you just let me glide all over-and i needed a good drift! it was so very soft in feel, almost like a whisper!

Posted 17 Years Ago


7 of 8 people found this review constructive.

it is a very lovely piece. the form is very interesting and works like a charm.
i read this a few times and it was greater each time. it is gorgeous.

'the dark sighs of the moon'

i love this line...

sincerely
ilene

Posted 17 Years Ago


7 of 7 people found this review constructive.

I loved it... well written!!!

Posted 17 Years Ago


7 of 8 people found this review constructive.

Wow! That really reminded me of a seagull of somekind but it was more beautiful than that! nice work

Posted 17 Years Ago


9 of 10 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 6, 2008
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