Love Gone Wrong

hmmmmmm

Did you change? Have I?
The sight of you
used to bring such pain.
What is it I feel now?

. . .I'm numb.
I'm stumped,
do I still like you?
I am not in love.
I do not love you.

But why is it,
that when I see you,
when you speak with me,
my heart feels sad?

I can never surprise you
or never amuse you.
I am never someone so exciting.
Stop telling me you miss me,
stop acting like you care.

Author's Note

ne advice? :/

Reviews

[HaleythePoet]

It seems like there are some really powerful emotions in this poem and that's what I love about it. It is easy to relate to, and while reading it I remember what I have been through. The last two lines were what caught me the most because that's what means the most. Great poem hun.

[XinHyun]

Thank you so much :)

[Dark Tower]

Very interesting layout. I like the way the emotions are expressed, they seem more raw and thus more real

[XinHyun]

thank you I usually write whenever my emotions take over

[Dark Tower]

Well poetry is expression of emotions, and yours seem beautiful.

[XinHyun]

thank you, that really means a lot since I don't think I write very well.

[Dark Tower]

I've read your other work, dont under sell yourself, you're an amazing writer

[XinHyun]

thank you :) really