Insanity

Engaged in the phenomenal ways of this

Fear running through the blood

Pain running through the veins

Peal of the layers of skin

There is nothing left to give

No one can come in

Sigh

Tension in the eye

Meaning in the expression

Broken bones

The boundaries broken too

Split the vessels

Tear down the pulse

Pinch the cells

I am fearless

Reviews

[Bryan]

I really liked your poem... which is a little strange because i try not to think about things like pain, as its not exactly a pleasant topic... yet i really like how you artistically described pain, you really dug deep and gave it meaning, i really like how you have conveyed the understanding. nice job!

[Time's The Bond]

Interesting way to convey pain

P.S feel free to read and review my poems.