Southern Bliss

Blue sea of Bonnets 

In fields where we lay laughing 

Here I do belong 

Reviews

[Clockwork]

I like these Haiku, especially the second one. The first two lines has some great organic imagery. I think that you could use a long dash after the words night in line two. I think that it would set up a dramatic pause and emphasize the cause and effect in the poem. Well done!

[JenniferMarie]

Good point. I will think about that. Thank you for your review.

[Coyote Poetry]

Both poem were amazing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Leigh]

This is a beautiful insight

[Bare trees]

Loved them both, great writing.

[James Paulin]

You have a nice touch for classic haiku

[Whiskurz]

Beautiful Haiku......Enjoyed.....Whisk

[Forest Green]

Must be southern to full understand this.

Light, airy, refined.

Nice write...

[pinpen]

This is so wonderful,

[JenniferMarie]

I was required to name the Haiku. However, Haiku, typically, don't have titles, correct?