Southern Bliss

Blue sea of Bonnets 

In fields where we lay laughing 

Here I do belong 

Reviews

[Clockwork]

I like these Haiku, especially the second one. The first two lines has some great organic imagery. I think that you could use a long dash after the words night in line two. I think that it would set up a dramatic pause and emphasize the cause and effect in the poem. Well done!

[JenniferMarie]

Good point. I will think about that. Thank you for your review.

[Daydreamer]

What a lovely feeling from capturing your favorite moments!
Adorable write:)

[JenniferMarie]

Thank you for reading and reviewing Manal. I appreciate it very much.

[Meliss@k]

Amen. So simple, and the simplicity seriously needs nothing more. If only everyone could experience the beauty of Texas... Its sunsets, wildlife, and bluebonnet fields. U just live my Texas :)

[JenniferMarie]

Thank you Melissa. I so agree. Sometimes I even get caught up in wanting to go to Europe or somewhere, but I'm a Texas girl at heart. There is so much beauty in Texas! The City, yes, but the country is bliss! :) thank you for your comment.

[Insomnia Chick]

This was very well put:) short and to the point.

[JenniferMarie]

Thank you for your comment. I truly appreciate it. Happy holidays to you all ! :)

[zainul]

It is a package of double Haiku.
Both are wonderful.
Would be the best if served singly.
But the poet best knew her intention behind this.
Enjoyed reading.

[JenniferMarie]

You are correct. I'm not sure why I posted two under Southern Bliss. I am going to show separate. Thank you for your comment.

[zainul]

Thanks for the realization.
Too many good foods at the same dinner may affect the prize for individual item of the chef!
A poet has to give full attention for each piece of poem,however simple the title might be.
Poems can't be marketed as assorted products like chocolates or biscuits!

[JenniferMarie]

I agree. I will post the others too soon. Have a great day. I hope we are all inspired today! :)

[zainul]

Best luck!

[Sami Khalil]

Nice.

[JenniferMarie]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Kyle]

Nice...this sounds like a romantic start to a wonderful story.......

[JenniferMarie]

It may be :) tbc

[Eagle Cruagh]

A pretty place to be and a beautiful
poem to see .
The image is nostalgic bringing home
memories of childhood.
---- John

[JenniferMarie]

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the review.

[FJ Davis]

Outstanding examples of modern haiku!
Lovely, Jennifer, and endearing--indeed, enchanting!

[JenniferMarie]

Thank you Frank. :)

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully captured images your words convey.

[JenniferMarie]

Thank you.