An Afternoon Walk

just a little free write.

I am telling you how much I love the winter, 
soft falling snow 
out a country home window. 
We are laughing at nothing in particular 
and you tell me what a jig is 
and how you want to go fishing 
but I can't listen 

because the wind has caught your hair 
and the sun is all over it 
and your earnest eyes like a child  
when you speak of Kingfish 
You tell me we should get a bigger boat 
and I, looking up at you,

can't stop thinking how much I love you.   

Reviews

[Gedalya]

Distractions, but hey it sounded like a really good moment.

[JenniferMarie]

Thank you for reviewing Gedalya. Yes, it was just one of those moments.

Happy writing

[V]

A very smooth and emotional writing. I like the descriptions which make it a beautiful piece. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading.

[JenniferMarie]

Thank you Mimi. I really appreciate you reading and commenting. Happy writing. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i have felt this...want to pay attention to what my significant other is saying...but am so caught up in looking into her eyes and being mesmerized that...uh, wait, what were you saying????

love this piece.

[JenniferMarie]

Thank you Jacob. I really appreciate your comment. it's true. it just happens sometimes. :)