I closed my eyes one summer night, An angel with wings stretching like a meadow, carried you to me. You seemed from a shipwreck in her arms, wings clicking in brisk wind,
Made me feel like music, like how beautiful voices can catch me, carry me like a kite, past clouds and sun.
I hear your voice, like a bubble I float on a stream of air, Moving forward like on a flat escalator straight through the French doors of an auditorium of stars.
I sit across from you, your constant breathe like whispers, small candles on the table brightening a dim world, your heart, glowing through a white shirt, I have something to tell you, I say, You’re an angel.
I understand. This isn't how I usually write, but it just was a free write and so I posted. Thank yo.. read moreI understand. This isn't how I usually write, but it just was a free write and so I posted. Thank you for your comment.
Due to the abundant use of imagery in this poem, the vision it paints is so beautiful and intricate. Great Job and Keep Writing! :)
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11 Years Ago
Thank you. It's not my usual style at all, but it was fun to write and thought I'd post it. I apprec.. read moreThank you. It's not my usual style at all, but it was fun to write and thought I'd post it. I appreciate your comment.