Selling myself

 

I know what I don’t want to be

I’m not afraid to die alone

I won’t forget my way back home

And everything I love is free

 

I find pleasure in the simplest things

Like dancing in a flowing skirt

And kneeling down into the dirt

To tease a stray cat with a string

 

I smile even when I cry

And won’t forget a lesson learned

I do not mind when I get burned

It reminds me that I am alive

 

I’m carefree and easy going

In love with love and imperfection

A sucker for some good attention

And my confidence is growing

 

So if you’re looking for the kind

Of girl who knows just where she stands

Simply come and take my hand

I'll gladly share my peace of mind

Reviews

[R J Askew]

'Stairway To Heaven' booming out on the radio as I read your poem, which I found a very visual read, a bit like watching a video accompanyment to a famous bit of music. '...everything I love is free' is a lovely thought and full of truth. The second verse is delightful. OK I know you are not going to stick your hands on hot-plates, but the notion of drawing something positive from a mishap, or pain is a good way to be, especially as the world is an imperfect place. I am sure there will be no shortage of buyers for such sheer love of life.

[Kelley]

This was a great poem Jennifer. I really like the way you express yourself too.
We all feel this way from time to time and I loved the way you ended this by inviting us all to come along.

Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Ellen Hammond]

Very nicely penned. It is so great to see young ladies who know themselves so well and have peace of mind. I can almost see this put to music. Great job!

[poetic soul]

very well written and i loved the title... very different outlook.. :)

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[Moineau]

This poem is nice. I liked the second stanza best. Its good to be carefree, you know? Life is too short for any other arrangement.

[Wildecat]

Loved the poem, and like people who aren't afraid to tell it like it is. Well done.

[Angel Baby]

Seems to me your muse is doing just fine, as I truly enjoyed your insightful read. Thanks for sharing.

[Doug]

it looks like you're getting your muse back just fine! i likd this poem a lot. thanks!

[bluessadmood]

this is a very beautiful writing ,so romantic so easy flowing and so witty and thoughtful...
I know what I don't want to be
I'm not afraid to die alone
I find pleasure in the simplest things
I smile even when I cry
I do not mind when I get burned
In love with love and imperfection
I'll gladly share my peace of mind...
these are very wise words,exactly of someone at a great peace with himself,i never mind to look perfect ,who want to?i dont care ,for what any will say,as long as i have a sharp mind,and as long as i am easy and at peace with myself,thats what i care for,this is some wonderful thoughtful writing ,i really enjoyed it a lot...

[chloe cruz]

This was witty, fun, and had a great sense of direction! Thanks for sharing!