Beautiful Mistake

Haunted by the memories..

He was radiant, 

Disarming and fearless

I was naive, innocent

and inexperienced.

Together we gravitated 

towards a dangerous line

I should have stayed away

You wouldn't face the pain

I couldn't help but to reach out

And now I'm standing here

Waiting for you to reappear 

From ashes to ashes

And dust to dust

No matter what they all say,

No matter what they all say,

No matter what they all say,

You will always be my beautiful mistake...

Author's Note

A love lost but not forgotten..

Reviews

[Planet x]

It is beautiful , sometimes we are aware we are doing a mistake but we still holding on it

[Anonymous -]

well written , could feel the thrill of what it was and the sadness that appeared. i liked it much

[Emma]

Thank you for the review!

[MelissaAndres]

Very good! I love how you ended this. Reminds me of an ex-boyfriend or two ... back in the day ...

[Emma]

Thank you, Melissa :)

[MelissaAndres]

You're very welcome!

[St.Quin]

Sweet and sad, especially the first stanza. Nice flow, and the title fits perfectly. I imagine it to be a melodramtic triphoppy/downbeat song sung by a girl with a calm and lonely voice.

[Emma]

Yes you are absolutely correct. Sorrows of the songstress..

[St.Quin]

Now I'd like to hear this sung :)

[terry smith]

beautiful poem Emma,hope you keep writing, would like to read more of what you have to say.

[Emma]

Thank you terry, I wrote it for a song.