If I Were To Die

If I were to die...

Maybe now;

or tomorrow.

The day after.

Next month.

Next year...

Right this second...

And leave this piece;

incomplete. 

Will you be satisfied?

If I were to die.

Today.

Will you cry for me?

Or will you die with me?

If I were to die...

Would you feel happy?

And start a silent celebration.

Thanking God...

Thanking me;

for getting rid of myself.

Would you feel pain?

Anguish?

Sorrow?

Or relief?

Maybe happiness.

Having my existence ceased.

Released...

So tell me, my love;

If I were to die...

What would you do?

Author's Note

I know I know~ it S.U.C.K.S

Reviews

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

This doesn't suck...at all! I think your descriptions and word experimentation are equally terrific! There's so much sorrow in this piece that I can feel every word in the pit of my stomach and...I love it! This means that this piece came out absolutely perfect in my book! Wonderful work, Jenna = ]

-Femme_Gothique (Brittany)

[Chris Yip]

Hey! You can write poetically and well too, with a style of your own. Though I am no poet but I know one when I read their work!! Keep the good work up. It doesn't suck one bit. In fact, I enjoyed it throughly with it's short and simple style but yet sophisticated play of words!!!

Hope you will review my work

[Sleeping Maiden]

No, it doesn't suck at all!! This is fantastic! I love your descriptions and the feelings you brought to this piece. It's stunning! It's so sad too.. but quite honest. We sometimes question these things..
Great write!! =)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I disagree with your author's note, it does not suck. I love this, its so real and honest and I often think about this a lot. Well done!

[Stephanie Slayer]

This is absolutely wonderful work