Secret Love Note

not really a poem, but instead the product of boredom in class.

Dear reader and recipient of my secret love note,

           

I am writing you a secret love note to inform you that I am in love with you (secretly). I think (secretly) that your eyes are something romantic sounding and your smile makes me (secretly) want to throw myself in worship at your feet. I feel (secretly) that my love for you extends to the very depths of my pancreas that twitches (secretly) every time you are near me. I long (secretly) to be next to you because that’s what admirers like me long to do (secretly). I want to (secretly) smell your pheromones as they excrete from your very being in the sweet essence that is strictly yours.

I hope (secretly) that you are taken away by my secret love note and that you too (secretly) love me too. I want (secretly) to have a fairy tale ending with a white horse and a fading sunset, and I can think (secretly) of no better person to play the part of my too good to be true prince. 

 

Signed,

 Your (secret) overly desperate (secret) admirer

Reviews

[TisWit]

This is good. Just because it doesn't conform to a standard in poetry doesn't mean you can't call it a poem. I get a little love overload from this, but I think that is kinda the point.

Also, is this from Thea to Andrew?

I really like this piece, its cute and fun and its no secret lol. what a fairy tale ending that would be!