Together and Forever

Best friends are like the stars they say,

You can’t always see them they say.

But they’re always there for you.

But my best friends?

They’re always seen with me,

They’ve always been there for me,

Through all my hardships.

They’re the reason I make it to tomorrow.

We hang out, we laugh, we cry.

But we do it together.

And that’s why we say,

Together and Forever. 

Author's Note

I didn't think much, I just wrote what came to my mind. Sorry, I've just started writing stuff, so they're not very good.

Reviews

[Faffy]

its great! dont discredit yourself so fast, there is no such thing as good and bad poetry its an expression of emotion and the way in which you use language to convey those feelings but really for your first poem (i assume it is ) its very good much better than when i started =)

-roshan

[Jennifer Sharon]

Thank you so much! :) Yes, it is. :)

[Faffy]

anytime and well done again =)

[Pradeep Nair]

friends are forever...
you emphasize it.

there is a smooth flow in your poem..
well done...