Nevermore

Nevermore

A Poem by Jen

Serene lasting gaze
Depth as endless as the sea
Never to come again

© 2015 Jen


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Change gazes to gaze and you have a 5-7-5 nice Haiku. I like it very much, but I am really like in limited words in my work now. Doing Senryu and Haiku and find all most poems are having less words. Keep it up. Thanks,

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jen

9 Years Ago

I'm so sorry I missed seeing your review! Thank you so much, I will do as you suggested.
Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

Never a problem as life tends to get in the way of the best of intentions. Peace out.
Few are the words, but much is the sorrow.
A tender, sad creation, dear Jen.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jen

9 Years Ago

Thank you dear Misery, I appreciate your review.
Misery

9 Years Ago

Always welcome.

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