Torment

give me your torment
blessed is misery within
your freedom at last

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Had to check out your work and this is one to chew on. I think I can grasp it in some ways. I embrace some of my dark times and I say I wallow in the darkness longer than needed since it seems to be a good place to write from. You will find I am very partial to less words Thank you for sharing.

[Jen]

Thank you for the review, appreciated! Sometimes...its what lay silent in-between the lines that escapes our senses. This was more about soothing someones torment, understanding that which is within each of us, no matter what it is, will be blessed ...once we understand that, we are free!

[lonewolf225]

I love your work, the tittle is what drew me in and I love the blunt shortness of the poem, someone who can explain something so deep in only a few lines is a really talented person.

[Jen]

Thank you so much for such a wonderful compliment!