TIME

The illusion of time can drive us to loose sight of what has already arrived, the reality already present

Tick Tock Tick Tock

We watch the clock

We pace for the race

Tick Tock Tick Tock

Its just a clock

No measure for pleasure

Tick Tock Tick Tock

We drive to strive

We all want to feel alive

Tick Tock Tick Tock

Its a clock

Its all just a crock!

Reviews

[613]

This poem made me laugh; not sure if it was supposed to. But I actually really enjoyed it. Would have liked for it to be longer though. Nice work.

- Brittney

[Jen]

We all could look at the color green and see it completely different than the next person, this happens because of the different experiences each one of us have had in life. I really love that your interpretation was with laughter! Thank you!

[613]

Very good point. & you're welcome!

[marcus]

Time...is just an illusion!

[Jen]

Exactly! Thank you for your comment.