Lovely, Jennie! This is a great testament to those who strive to be different and not fall into the constant mold, which I can assume is the "black umbrella". I love the choice of color for the umbrella, what inspired it? I myself have a blue one (with polka dots) haha. :)
Enjoyed it a lot! Well done :):)
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
I literally did see someone walking by with a yellow umbrella. Love your blue polka dot one, though.. read moreI literally did see someone walking by with a yellow umbrella. Love your blue polka dot one, though! This is simply about standing out from the crowd and being memorable (in a positive way, of course). I'm so happy you liked it!
Not only umbrella but my dresses, shoes, shirts, and pants are black as well. I love how this poem has affected me and how it led me to reflect of my own dullness. Haha. Next time, I'll wear bright colors and have a brighter perspective in life. Great job, Miss Jennie!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I suppose I've done my job if I inspired a reader to self-reflection! :) Of course it is the persp.. read moreI suppose I've done my job if I inspired a reader to self-reflection! :) Of course it is the perspective that matters, not one's literal choice in clothing colors. I'm so glad you liked this little poem Blue; it's truly gratifying.
Something bright to cheer up a gloomy, cloudy day is always appreciated and admired.
Reflection on the experience with joy!
I never have good luck with umbrellas though--they either break or come up missing.
The wind tends to damage the ones I purchase and make them useless.
however, I love seeing colorful ones against the wet, gray clouds and tumbling skies.
:)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
If I can bring some cheer to a gloomy day, I've accomplished my mission in writing! Many thanks!
Oh yes Jennie. I nice big yellow umbrella not only keeps the rain off, but provides
the sunshine that is missing.
Even the dullest, dreariest of our days can be brightened by the "yellow umbrella"
we all carry with us, within us.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
The "yellow umbrella" is that unique spark of life essence and joy that each soul has. Glad you rea.. read moreThe "yellow umbrella" is that unique spark of life essence and joy that each soul has. Glad you read this little poem and hope you enjoyed it, Dave!
there is always a light on the darkest day, I guess Jennie you found it in a yellow umbrella, I don't think you could ever be a black umbrella person, your a writer we only use color :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
:) I hope you're right! I'm glad you liked my little poem. I'm been surprised and gratified by the.. read more:) I hope you're right! I'm glad you liked my little poem. I'm been surprised and gratified by the response to a poem that came to me so quickly.
I bet that woman never realized she would end up in a poem...her and her yellow umbrella..I have an umbrella with comics all over it...my husband worked at a newspaper...ha...enjoyed...Rose:)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
So happy that you enjoyed it! Thanks much for stopping by to read.
Jennie: Once again, I can tell you're an accomplished poet. I loved it. I wrote a poem, never revisited and I swear, the lady had a large yellow purse: I actually began with yellow. To be unique, to find yourself, no matter what society's dogma places upon us is the way to go. Yellow Umbrella, wow, I wish I had one. I've always expressed myself through fashion, and once my daughter said to someone, she dresses differently. I didn't ask her, but it made me smile. I don't mean green zebra striped tights, with a purple scarf, but the challenge to find something different is fun to me, because, we all are individuals. No? Thank you once again. Great poem! Dale
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much for a review that not only tells me you liked the poem, it tells me the reason why.. read moreThank you so much for a review that not only tells me you liked the poem, it tells me the reason why, and it tells me you understand the writing! Your reading and review are much appreciated, Dale. I'm looking forward to visiting some more of your writing soon. Regards,
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