Love as I See It

This grew out of some discussion I've had in the past few days about the nature of love.

Some say true love doesn’t exist.

Some speak of it as a sweet, but quaint,

Outdated notion.

 

Some speak of love as a disease

An addiction

A codependent trap

In which we lose ourselves

Until there’s no longer a “me,” only “we.”

 

Some are looking for someone to “complete” them.

Others say love is the union of two already “complete” souls.

I say we shouldn’t overthink it.

I say if we wait to be self-actualized,

We’ll wait forever; at least I would!

 

We won’t know the joy of a love

That allows for give and take

For compromise

That gives both space to grow,

Because if you give just a little of yourself

You can get so much in return.

 

We won’t know the pleasure of having someone

Who knows us intimately and accepts us anyway,

Makes us feel secure,

The simple joy of having a companion

To share the good things in life.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Yes, you're absolutely right. Love's a sharing of "good" things in life. It shares both pain and pleasure; heat of spring & coldness of winter; emotions of heart & tears of eyes; faith in compassion & belief in "true-lies"... which're utmost truth, but still they ain't find it. Beautiful imagery you've come up with. Enjoyed reading your thought invoking poetry!

[Jennie Baron]

Thank you very much--again. You're much appreciated.

[willweb]

Every line of your poem today carries with it a truth. Love can be all of these things or none. Your poem expresses it all very well and I have a good feeling inside after reading this. I really enjoyed your poem today.

[Jennie Baron]

I have a good feeling inside after reading such a great review! I'm gratified that you enjoyed it. Thanks so much!

[Ty]

Incredible voice throughout this piece. I feel like I can hear you speaking these words.

[Jennie Baron]

Thank you! I think a couple of my poems have this sort of conversational style and I like it when they work out that way. Glad you took the time to read and comment.

[Nusquam Esse]

I really do like this; I am not sure about the nature of love... but I can at least acknowledge the wisdom in here for finding a long term companion. To give a little of yourself, your emotions, your time, your energy; and in exchange, to receive so much, to help you through every day. Ideally, both people are made stronger, and thrive off the other. It isn't about having an identity that relies on the other; but rather a relationship which makes you both stronger. Thank you for penning this!

[Jennie Baron]

You are very welcome. Glad you enjoyed it. Again that is especially good coming from someone whose writing I enjoy so much also.

[Rita L. Sev]

I say we shouldn’t overthink it...

I could not agree more with your concept of love, Jennie! You expressed this so well.

[Jennie Baron]

Glad you think so and thanks for taking the time to read!

[loverofpoetry7]

I really like this and I just read what the other reviewers said and I have to agree with them. There's really not much more I can say but "ditto" to all of them. Very good use of words and so I like what you had to say. Great write

[Jennie Baron]

I genuinely appreciate the good word and am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮This is so romantic. I wish everyone thought of love this way, then maybe there wouldn't be so much hatred in the world. I don't know, just thinking out loud, haha. Sometimes people have too high expectations for love and miss out on what could have been amazing. Great job with this poem. ^-^╰☆╮

[Jennie Baron]

Aw, thanks so much, Brittany! Your kind words are much appreciated, and you "get" exactly what I was speaking o!

[Luissanto]

Wow, this poem is incredible, it is well written and well thought out. Your poem touched me
in a very special way. You are truly a great writer...
Thank you for sharing.

[Jennie Baron]

Thank you so much, Luis! It's always wonderful to know if my writing touches someone.

[Damara]

Im still waiting. But this poem spoke to me all the same and to me can be use as a review of love. A chance to gain insight to the emotions experience by those who have experienced love. Many thanks for sharing

[Jennie Baron]

You are very welcome and I'm always gratified when my writing speaks to someone! You're very kind.

[Frieda P]

I appreciate your view of love, that's the way it should be...sigh.

[Jennie Baron]

I'm glad you agree! Maybe overly romantic but I've decided to stop apologizing for the romantic tone of my writing and just embrace and accept that it's my world view and my style. Thanks for reading, Frieda!