Love as I See It

This grew out of some discussion I've had in the past few days about the nature of love.

Some say true love doesn’t exist.

Some speak of it as a sweet, but quaint,

Outdated notion.

 

Some speak of love as a disease

An addiction

A codependent trap

In which we lose ourselves

Until there’s no longer a “me,” only “we.”

 

Some are looking for someone to “complete” them.

Others say love is the union of two already “complete” souls.

I say we shouldn’t overthink it.

I say if we wait to be self-actualized,

We’ll wait forever; at least I would!

 

We won’t know the joy of a love

That allows for give and take

For compromise

That gives both space to grow,

Because if you give just a little of yourself

You can get so much in return.

 

We won’t know the pleasure of having someone

Who knows us intimately and accepts us anyway,

Makes us feel secure,

The simple joy of having a companion

To share the good things in life.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Yes, you're absolutely right. Love's a sharing of "good" things in life. It shares both pain and pleasure; heat of spring & coldness of winter; emotions of heart & tears of eyes; faith in compassion & belief in "true-lies"... which're utmost truth, but still they ain't find it. Beautiful imagery you've come up with. Enjoyed reading your thought invoking poetry!

[Jennie Baron]

Thank you very much--again. You're much appreciated.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Love as i See It"
Jennie Baron,
Real Love is very tenuous and can easily be taken for granted by the wrong person. Caution in accepting another into one's life is of utmost importance. When the right person is found it is good. But many, many people have come to live a nightmare by becoming involved with someone whom is dangerous in some or more ways. Love as I see it is a lovely reminder that love does exist and is accessible and should be treasured.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Jennie Baron]

What can I reply to this review that you haven't already said? You've gotten my point exactly. Maybe I'm overly optimistic, but I'd rather err on the optimistic side. I'm so glad, again, for your reading and review

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Jennie,
You are kind and I appreciate that. sometimes when something is written our inner life and experience at any given time is how a peice of work like yours is interpreted. I know that you found inspiration for your poem here from your experience in conversations with others and I am tickled by the result. I love to be challenged by another's sharing of thought in writing. Thanks again!
Kathy

[Anindita Janhabee]

Cent percent correct...
I appreciate your thoughts a lot...
quite sweet and acceptable...
I liked the way you managed to pen down such a lovely poem with your inspiring words... much touchy...
we all know what love is, but only few of us understand what it is....
that makes a great difference...
wonder of humanity...beauty of universe...its only love...
thanks for sharing such a sweet poem...
Anindita : )

[Jennie Baron]

Thank you for reading and for your kind words. It is much appreciated.

[Anindita Janhabee]

you're welcome...

[Sami Khalil]

Sharing the good things is meant to bring happiness. Sharing the loads can bring much needed relief. Sharing love completes the circle. Excellent. ....:))))

[Jennie Baron]

Sharing the load, paying it forward when it comes to the love we've been given, are major themes of my writing. I'm glad it resonates with readers.

[Sami Khalil]

I love it. Keep it up....:))))

[Sami Khalil]

"self-actualized,
We’ll wait forever; at least I would!

We won’t know the joy of a love
That allows for give and take"

[Jennie Baron]

I'm glad you liked that turn of phrase. As always, thank you for visiting my little poem.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ....:)))))

[Dave]

Jennie - Love isn't something you find, it's something that finds you. Two shopping carts in front of you in the supermarket. Jumping to avoid being splashed by the waves at the beach. He or she will be there they'll smile and by golly there you are. There is no time or place for it. It's not something that can be scheduled. I posted a short story The Picture that dealt with this "problem"? Perhaps you might be familiar with the song from the show South Pacific. Some Enchanted Evening is its' title.

[Jennie Baron]

Your thoughts on my little poem are almost poetic themselves. Enjoyed your review and thanks so much for reading. Can you send me a read request for your story so I'll be sure to get to it?

[Dave]

Jennie - I'm afraid I don't know how to use the Read Request. I can tell you that the short story I posted is listed in this site, somewhere. It's title is The Picture.

[Jennie Baron]

When you bring up your writing, you should see a box on the upper right that gives you a variety of options including sending a read request. But no problem, I'll look for it and put it on my reading list so I don't forget.

[Levi Levin]

A very nicely penned piece!

[Jennie Baron]

Thanks very much for reading! I'm glad you liked it.

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome

[Philip Muls]

Ah the nature of love...It probably feels very different for any one of us, it is very personal. And surely it cannot be 'understood' and therefor we should not overthink but just accept.

Your poem sounds very authentic, you have been there...Well done.

Please read my story Lovesick if you have the time.

[Jennie Baron]

This poem is an oldie, so I'm happy to still be receiving reviews. (My poetic pen is silent for the moment because I'm preoccupied with major rewriting on my novel.) Your kind words are much appreciated and I'm saving your story in my reading list.

[Philip Muls]

Good luck with the novel. I will be following you.

[Jennie Baron]

Thanks again!

[Relic]

Giving without expecting anything in return always seems to have its benefits. I would agree we should never over-think it. Your last 2 lines seems to say what I am thinking. Good poem Jennie.

[Jennie Baron]

It's always wonderful when my words speak to a reader in this way. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

[Relic]

No problem. :)

[Aphy!]

Simply breathtaking. I enjoyed it thoroughly and I agree with everything you've mentioned in your beautiful piece. I've read like 5 and I just can't get enough.

[Jennie Baron]

Five?! Oh, my goodness, I'm truly gratified. I'm so glad you stopped by to read and took the time to give me such a wonderful review!

[Aphy!]

the pleasure's all mine

[Dave]

Sometimes you don't have to look. Sometimes love finds you. A face across a crowded room. A laugh that you hear over and over. You "bump" into each other and the aroma stays with you.

[Jennie Baron]

Yes indeed. Doesn't love seem to come when you're least looking for it! You get the point of this writing. Thank you so much for your reading and review!