Easter

A few thoughts I threw together as I celebrated Easter yesterday

I sat in church this Easter morning feeling exultant,

Full of  joy and peace.

I rejoiced at every “alleluia”

Thinking of the One whose death conquered death.

 

And I accepted the symbols of His body and blood

As He told us to do to remember Him,

Knowing I was worthy to do so only by His grace.

 

The choir, the organ, the brass, the bells,

All the glorious music

Warmed my heart, set it soaring.

 

Perhaps I’m better with words than some,

Yet I had none for this feeling

That didn’t seem old and trite.

Who would comprehend anyway?

People misunderstand His words so badly.

 

Yet I was overflowing with emotion

That I wanted to articulate

And I prayed that somehow I’d find a way.

 

Then the answer came to me:

“Just live the way He taught us,

Keeping love in mind above all.

You’ll need no words at all

For everyone to see Him in you.”

Author's Note

Faith and religion are a departure for me in my poetry (although not fiction) but an important part of my life, so I welcome opinions on this. It was a spur-of-the moment kind of thing...Any suggestions for changes? Is this worth leaving up?

Reviews

[John Anderson]

Very nicely done. Felt your delivery was right on the mark. Enjoyed it much!

[Jennie Baron]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. It's always appreciated. I'm gratified to have received enough positive reaction that you all convinced me to leave this up.

[David Scott]

To reflect the image of God is our greatest actualization of humanity. It is the resurrection and not the death where hope is assured.
A great thought to share.
I enjoyed the read.

[Jennie Baron]

Point well taken. Maybe it should be "the One whose resurrection conquered death?" It sounds quite different, but I'll think on that. I appreciate your reading!

[David Scott]

Yes, it is a different focus and more to the point of the sacrifice I feel... Too much focus on the price of freedom than enjoying the gift of freedom IMO. :)
More than semantics for me.
I'm happy you were stimulated to ponder.

[Chloe_Spence]

Well done- lovely piece of writing, a fantastic tribute :)

[Jennie Baron]

Your reading it is much appreciated, Chloe. I'm glad you liked it.

[Chloe_Spence]

You are more than welcome :)

[A. Amos]

I love this piece of yours, read like a poetic story and I felt like a prayer; i have special respect for you my friend. After reading your work one can easily sense, your not only a great writer but also a great human being; who's blessed with caring heart. Thank you my dear...

[Jennie Baron]

You are so welcome, Amos!

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

Definitely leave it up! I like the tribute

[Jennie Baron]

Fantastic! Glad you liked it.