My Voice

Okay, maybe “despair” isn’t the word I’m looking for.

Maybe it’s just “desperation.”

Maybe it’s impatience and anxiousness, hoping to find my unique voice, but I feel I’m shouting in a vacuum, broadcasting loud and clear when no one’s tuned to my frequency.

Plus, whenever I think I have something profound to say, someone cleverer has said it more eloquently than I could.

But you know what?  I think that fate, coincidence, God, whatever, aligns things so that surely my signal will resonate with the correct receiver and someone will find meaning in the program. 

And won’t that be grand?

Reviews

[The Representative]

Jennie, I'll express something to you, which is usually a concern of mine......after, the effort used to think clearly about what it is needed to say, it's then form of presentation.


Your form's presentation, of what it was you were just saying was perfect.


I'm not myself someone who gives much time to notions such as fate, or God, at least not in the way commonly thought of, however......what it was that "you" had to say, resonated with me.



Lovely piece of expression.

[Jennie Baron]

Thanks much, I appreciate it. It's gotten good response for something that just came to me out of the blue all at once.

[The Representative]

So much of the time, they're the hardest things to take the time and make the effort to write aren't they......the things which, for as intelligent as they are, occur to us spontaneously.

[Katherine]

Honestly hate saying" oh this is me" but this really is only said so much better than I would have said. I love how you really say how you feel and what you think Amazing!

[Jennie Baron]

Thank you, Marsh! I'm glad it had some meaning for you. I'm probably more wordy than you are because I think I'm a fiction writer at heart, it takes me longer to convey the mood or feeling.

[David Scott]

Every part has a part to play... indeed.
We are a note in the song our Creator sings to the universe...
Yes, it is grand!
A lovely thought and a very fine write Jennie.

[Tina Louise UK]

I could relate to this piece..great piece :) x

[TL Boehm]

Amen. So often I've written something - wanting to say something that screams in my heart - but comes out as a grunt...but I would be the first to tell anyone, keep writing. Keep speaking. Things can and do align and when that happens....yeah its grand.
Found this eloquent.

[Jennie Baron]

I truly appreciate your thoughts!