Unrated

 

I am not rated ‘G’

Or ‘E’.

Every man

Woman and

Child

Cannot enjoy

Me-

 

There’s too much

Ride in

My thighs

And passion

In my

Eyes.

 

Not to mention

The b***h that comes

From my lips,

And the

Sexy

Soft

Sensual

Sling

Of my hips.

 

(it’s a hell of a man

who can handle those

Hips)

 

I am more rated,

‘take in small doses’

With food (and some wine?)

Or ‘do not operate heavy

Machinery for a time’

 

I’m not enough to

Go around

And too much to

Satisfy

But that doesn’t mean

Everyone will stop from

Wanting

To try.

Reviews

[Edmond Dantes]

OK, this was very skillfully done. And did you mean to structure this that way?
"Not to mention
The b***h that comes
From my lip,
And the
Sexy
Soft
Sensual
Sling
Of my hips."

-loved it. Very witty & playfully sexy.

[J]

Ha. Very sassy. So many women I've met are the complete opposite: submissive, non-fiery, downtrodden almost; it makes me sad sometimes, but also protective, I guess. And strong, independent women tend to be judged harshly by both sexes, or so I've found. So... power to ya, for defying the sheeple crowd.
=)

[Jess: ~The Sidekick~]

I have to agree with my girl. This is a totally awesome poem. =D Well written.

[Dawn Jones]

I LOVE IT!!!! Can I be unrated too?

[Mr. Deft Diction]

Huh, girl? And that's how you get ya sexy back. I'm diggin' your swagger in this piece. Definitely sounds like a person who knows themself; as well as a person who knows the power(s) they possess.

Great write!

[Nick Erickson]

Excellent piece here, the flow and imagery, who you are coming out so well. The whole concept of the poem comes through so well in your words.

I'm not enough to
Go around
And too much to
Satisfy
But that doesn't mean
This is going to stop
Everyone fromWantingto try.

Well done.