secrets and wishes

just something i whipped up last minute

Secrets and Wishes

                                 

                                   The dead are the ones with open ears

They hear what is to be heard,

That tries to be hidden in the dark.

What lies beneath the surface,

The rotting roots beneath the lotus tree.

The light is filled with shadows.

Waiting to devour our souls

Our hearts.

The sun dies in the dark

It is eaten by secrets that pollute

The air.

This is life.

Cant people see?

Reviews

[MandaClarine]

beautiful poem! excellent message portrayed. you have a way of portraying things in such a unique way, I love it :)

[angelica]

thank you very much :)

[angelica]

yes in a way, but it is also meant that no matter how hard people try to be secretive the truth comes out because the shadows reveal what is hidden in the light if that makes since

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I see what you are trying to describe, that could be attributed to surroundings and peers.

[angelica]

Yeah exactly!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The poem could be interpreted as dead lost spirits jealous of life stalk the living to find what could be used to obstruct normal beings.