Unspoken Apologies

All the things I could never say aloud.

I’m sorry
I let my love
wither
to hate.

I’m sorry
I realized it
a little
too late.

I’m sorry
I couldn’t see
this was
our fate. 

Reviews

[Flow]

The title drew me into this one, I feel people have so many unspoken words hidden behind politically correct words. I like the last verse the most I feel this apology is to ones, self more than anyone else for if we could see the turn out of our decision than it would affect or decisions. I know I wish I could see the results before I committ to the action. Great write, I like the interspective thoughts of this poem.

[[untitled]]

Very nice. Its not complicated and that to me is a very good thing in a poem! Seriously though great piece

[Cristal Reviewess]

you should always voice what needs to be said

[Windy]

I really am enjoying your poetry. This one reminds me of my life a while back (thank goodness), ever heard the song "The Dance" by Garth Brooks? Kind of reminded me of that. Good job once again. Windy

[cmaynard]

Nice and concise. I think it may even work well as a verse in a much large piece, maybe a three verse set, that just me though, I do like it.

[Kaleidoscope Apocalypse]

It's short, but it says so much.. These words speak volumes and I think you've captured the emotions and feelings for this piece quite well.

[Prose-full]

very fresh to the souls need to apologize...