The Choice

The Choice

A Poem by The Autumn Faerie
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So many questions, so few options...

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If you could make the pain go away,
Would you ask him to stay?

If you could control its tick-tock,
Would you turn back the clock?

If you knew he couldn’t forget her,
Would you make him regret her?

If you could love only him,
Would you follow at whim?

If you had nothing to fear,
Would you not shed a tear?

If you had nothing to lose,
How would you chose?

© 2008 The Autumn Faerie


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Wow - I like the flow of this - the subject matter hits close to home.... had the same situation with a guy that just could not get over the last one...yet found it ok to come and tear my heart apart.... hurts - really hurts. My Remembering January was about this guy..... then he came around again a couple months ago (after not being around for about 6, guess what - I felt very little for him.... just kinda sad.... so time will help ....

Kath

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I enjoy reveling in how you would "deal" with such a fellow...thank you for sharing more character...I like it! and You!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good! I wonder what I would do?
What would you do?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sad but so true............Windy

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

if i had nothing to lose i would be a dangerous women because men have done nothing but hurt me

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow - I like the flow of this - the subject matter hits close to home.... had the same situation with a guy that just could not get over the last one...yet found it ok to come and tear my heart apart.... hurts - really hurts. My Remembering January was about this guy..... then he came around again a couple months ago (after not being around for about 6, guess what - I felt very little for him.... just kinda sad.... so time will help ....

Kath

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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The Autumn Faerie

Withering in, OH



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Just a lover of words-- A poet of sorts... A soul, who knows what it's like-- To lose. I'll be nineteen soon, and I've been doing recreational writing for about eight years now, though I was discoura.. more..

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