No Excuses

No Excuses

A Poem by Angel
"

Sad

"

No more reason....

V1:  It's freezing in this house,

i'm wearing a short blouse,

If only, I--f... only you could realize how scared I am,

Why the hell have you not found this out,

I really wanna S----h---o--u----t

Chorus: Is this it,

No more reasons.

no more excuses....words, justice ......(g-solo)

I want to see you.. and see the truth.....

V2:  Strumming lightly on this old guitar,

I write this song for you,

It's all the way through....

I wish I could not shake thinking of you.....

Blood running from my eyes,

to many times have I fallen apart from those perpetuating sighs,

I don't want this to be over.....but.........  

V4:  No human can recognize that ache I've got

Too many times I have fought....

for y-----ou.

Oh, ay ohh

 

 

© 2008 Angel


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this is fantastic.
quite an amazing lyricist.
too many times have I fallen apart from those perpetuating sighs,
is an awe inspiring line.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I really like this, it shows much emotion and description. There is one line that i keep stumbling over...I wish i could not shake thinking of you.......i think it would sound better if you said i wish i would not shake while thinking of you....just an opinion :-) But i REALLY LIKE IT!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Angel
Angel

Lake Stevens, WA



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