My heart.

It's kind of sad, maybe a bit broken, but the general meaning (which there are two) is a girl slowly dieing of a broken heart.

My heart is in pain,
It hides within the darkest shadows.
Praying not to be bothered,
for people seem to make it's tears come down like rain.

My heart is like glass,
Easy to see through, but fragile to touch.
It begs for someone to love it,

just like you, just as much.

My heart says it's impossible,
because your love can never be replaced.
I wish you could be here with me;
My life will never be the same.

Author's Note

I'm not a new writer. I've been writing ever since I was little. But this is the actual first time I've posted my poems for other to review. I've posted samples of my stories and fanfictions, but never my poems.

Reviews

[Rendawg]

and you should continue to post and get out there and write
you have a lot of potential

[underwriter]

i like it, its honest. the second stanza is my favorite!
"My heart is like glass,
Easy to see through, but fragile to touch.
It begs for someone to love it,
just like you, just as much."
good write! i look foreward to reading more of your work!

[Morgan]

This is really good, Its how my heart feels right now. If only the world were rid of players and cheaters ehh? Good job!

[Sarah Jane]

I like this:) You will be popular on here, just wait until people discover you