The Rebirth

The Rebirth

A Poem by Jeff

My wheels were spinning

I was going nowhere

Just as fast as I could

No touch, no feeling

So much this weary soul

Weathered on this journey

There's a spark inside me

A life reborn




© 2011 Jeff


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and the poetry really keeps that spark going ^ . ^

Posted 13 Years Ago


How i could relate to that feeling.. no movement... soul weary.. beat down. But you don't leave off there.. you give us hope that life can come again. Powerful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


it rolls right along . . .

Posted 13 Years Ago


i'm fairly certain that the only thing i can say to describe how i feel about this is: amen. and the spark kinda feels good. excellent work.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 22, 2011
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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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