You're So

You're So

A Poem by Jeff

Kiss your neck

Pull your hair

Meet your stare

You're so lovely


Bite my lip

Close my eyes

Meet my lips

I'm dying here


Push you back

Make you moan

Make you vibrate

You're a special one


Kiss me hard

Pull me closer

Make me work

I'm really ready

© 2011 Jeff


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I love the rhythm! The fast pace gives it a deep intensity that matches the passionate and sensual words. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


When i read this to me it had a little beat to it, like it should be to music! Loved It!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Phew! Yep, hit the spot! Excellent, the most striking thing here love, is the pace, hot, hot, hot! xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Passionate, very good, like this

I was just thinking, havent seen a new one from you in a few, and then there you are with this.
Awesome piece

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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