You're So

Kiss your neck

Pull your hair

Meet your stare

You're so lovely

Bite my lip

Close my eyes

Meet my lips

I'm dying here

Push you back

Make you moan

Make you vibrate

You're a special one

Kiss me hard

Pull me closer

Make me work

I'm really ready

Reviews

[AlieahRose]

I REALLY LIKE...
THIS IT FEELS...
LIKE IT'S NOT...
FINISHED...
BUT...
I GET IT...
IT IS FINISHED...
A GREAT PIECE...
THANKS FOR SHARING...

[lovejulez03]

I love this piece. It shows great passion and desire building and building. Something I'm sure most people can relate to. I love the feeling of this poem and how the reality of the emotions jumps out at you. Well written!

[Liza]

nice tension building - subtle and intense - intentions of giving - full attention intact - heart, mind and body - what every girl wants :)

[Stef Outsiders]

Wow... the passion in this is.. wow!.. so simply and good!!

[Thea Fuentebella]

sensual and passionate...though i think there's more to be said than what you've written here.
thumbs up!

[Apathy To Empathy]

You Owe You Pay is right. >///< Nicely done

[YouoweYoupay]

This was sweet and fun to read! The flow leading to one another gets more heated. Nice.

[Ashley]

lucky girl. very sensual, with an almost frenzied pace. thoroughly enjoyed reading this one....several times.

[Akshat♥]

really romantic...i really like this type of stuff..
awesome poem:)

[Ashley]

i love it its soooooooo sexy and gets me hawt! ;) great job.