Serve Your Soul

Serve Your Soul

A Poem by Jeff

Too many masters to serve

We've got the dollar

More to grab

More to spend


We've got new shiny objects

All the newest and greatest

We have to have right now

Without rhyme or reason


So much time

Wasted on the win

We must know

We have to find it within


They all want us to serve them

And ignore the wind

All you have to serve

Is to serve your soul

© 2011 Jeff


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ONCE AGAIN YOU'VE...
BROUGHT STRONG WORDS...
AND DEEP MEANING...
IN YOUR WRITING...
JOB WELL DONE...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Creatively written. Well done. I can feel the emotion behind this and it's short and to the point. Really makes you think about the truth.

Posted 13 Years Ago


yes the soul we shall serve
the soul shall set us free
All other masters are setting suns
Who cares for them as we wait, for night to arrive(come)

Like the spirit. Deep poem in simple language..Good work..

Posted 13 Years Ago


The soul is what frees us! To serve others, is all good, but without serving ourselves, we fall into the trap of stagnancy! Excellent work! xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


and so the truth is revealed

Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is absolutely true! We can serve others, why not serve ourselves too right?

Good job friend! I love this piece :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


There is truth in this, the world might as well grow money on trees... nice write! thumbs up!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nicely said.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem holds so much truth! Take care of yourself and live life as you see fit, be true to yourself and family! Well written

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the concept of this "And ignore the wind/All you have to serve/ Is to serve your soul. Its so true. We're driven by what society says we need to have: money,popularity and objects. Its liberating to be able to simplify and just do whats best for ourselves and the ones we love. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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