This Life

This Life

A Poem by Jeff
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My mind is diving deep in itself. Trying to pull myself back from the brink.

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It's about love and hate

It's about sex and death

Fathers and sons

Mothers and wives


It's about a man

Trying to keep it together

While falling apart


Death lurks around every corner

Life happens before your eyes

This life is about a man

Holding it together


While the world pulls him apart

By the strings

Determined to remain strong


© 2011 Jeff


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VERY RAW WRITING...
YOU CAN TELL...
A STORY WITHOUT...
BEING SO VERBOSE...
THAT'S A GREAT...
QUALITY IN A...
WRITTER AND THIS...
IS SO TRUE...
LIFE IS NOT...
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THANKS FOR SHARING...

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's funny how men pretends to be so strong yet the whole inside them are slowly breaking apart. Why is it so hard for guys to show what they really feel inside? Why do you have to hide it?

This is a great poem. Short but powerful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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very expressive - yes this life is a funny thing - I like the almost hopeful note to it though - as life tightens its clutch - he holds it together - determined to stay strong! nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Woo, i could feel the power in this, the emotion and feel some truth in this!
life is hard, but we have to make the most of it and ignore those dark path of destruction, cut those strings too...
great piece my dear!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Lots of emotion and truth in this one. The world is a powerful (person, place, or thing)
It is indeed hard to be strong and stay strong.
Sometimes I too feel like a rubberband, being pulled, stretched to my limits.
Life is so hard sometimes.
Great piece

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem is strong with truth, Alot of people feel there being pulled in all different directions and they try to remain strong! Great poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 22, 2011
Last Updated on February 22, 2011

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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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