Valentines Day

My mind is swimming with you

Hoping you're thinking of me

Wondering if you're happy with him

The man who didn't care

Until another was taking his place

I'm thinking he's given you

Your Valentines gift

A card, some candy, and some flowers

Maybe he'll take you out

Fix you some Italian Chicken

You know he'll never understand you

The way I did

He'll never lay down his life for you

Like I was willing to do

Someday you'll see

He'll go back to his old ways

Forgetting about you

Keeping you down

Ignoring the beautiful woman

That is standing before him

If that someday comes

Girl find me

Because in my arms

You'll always have a place

To call home

Reviews

[AlieahRose]

I HATE VALENTINES...
DAY YET I...
LOVE THIS PIECE...
IT'S NICE TO...
SEE A GUY...
PUTTING HIS SELF...
OUT THERE FOR...
A GIRL ANOTHER...
GREAT WRITE JEFF...

[iamkim]

What a love... (Sigh) Every word in a written poem has something behind it. I guess you've had a thing like this in the past. Very nice work Jeff :)

[Nish Nish the Fish]

oh jeese, i could cry. this was beautiful and heartbreaking and so endearing! I think i've been on both sides of this infamous story, they both suck. Life is a huge trade off...nothing comes without crap (for lack of a better word). I really appreciated this! well done!

[Stef Outsiders]

This is so real on so many levels, I laid my life down once when i really loved someone but was never that way for me... another awesome piece honey!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

LOve the story in this poem, great write!

[?]

Will you stop writing about my life!!!!!!! lol
This is awesome Jeff. I loved it.
Lots of emotions and just flat telling it like it is.
Wonderful