I Remember Goodbye

I Remember Goodbye

A Poem by Jeff

I remember waking up next to you

I swore that day I'd love you forever

I'd never let you go

Someday you'd be my wife


I remember the first time I heard your voice

Sweet, and shy

I wanted to hear that voice everyday

For the rest of my life


The day you picked me up

That smile took away any doubt

The moment I touched those lips

I knew I'd never be the same


Now I sit here all alone

You took your smile away

Returned it to him

The one who didn't care


I don't hear your voice anymore

The sweet, sexiness that excited me

That made everything seem better

Is now speaking to him


Those kisses that took my soul

Are now for him

The one who didn't care

Until I was in love with you

© 2011 Jeff


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THIS REMINDS ME...
OF SOMETHING THAT...
HAPPENED TO A...
FRIEND OF MINE...
LOVE IS SOMETHING...
INTERSTING GREAT JOB...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ohh....this is painful but direct and emotive love, sometimes we need to vent it as it is, there are too many crosses to bear in love at times!
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very sad.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very sad poem that states what men goes through not only us women!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so sad!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this, very deep and touching...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I like this one,
Women, go figure, lol
Most of us have all gone through something like this. This is so deep and emotional.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like this poem...very deep and reflective...stuff guys goes through but won't admit...great way to capture it through ink.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 9, 2011
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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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