Into the Void

Into the Void

A Poem by Jeff

Left to face this alone

The darkness rises like a beast

I'm on my own


You should have never came

The wounds you left

I'll never be the same


Darkness is alive

Infecting mysoul

How will I survive


Look what you've become

In my eyes

The one with the venom


What have you done

To my soul

My God what have you done



© 2011 Jeff


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THIS SOUNDS HURT...
BUT...
MORE THAN THAT...
ANOTHER GREAT WRITE...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dark, broken emotions here. Expressed with a plain, nice flow. Keep writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


You sound fierce in this, like as if someone has hurt you, it radiates from your words...

Posted 13 Years Ago


I could actually feel this as I read it, awesome.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. excruciating ...
. no words ... speechless and moved to tears ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very powerful poem! when someone hurts you you wonder what they've done! you wonder how to get your life back on track, and in the end you finally realized all you can do is move farward!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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None of will be the same, because we grow and learn.
This is really really powerful Jeff. Speak it out!!
Alot of your poems I can so relate.
Thanks again for sharing with me


Posted 13 Years Ago


Stirring!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 6, 2011
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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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