Confessions

Bottle of whiskey

Empty glass

Bloodshot eyes

This is my darkest moment

You're swimming in my mind

I've got this hole in my heart

That only you can fill

I take another drink

The darkness descends even more

I'm kind of fucked

Since you've been gone

I play these songs

And write these words

For a love

I may never see again

For an angel

I may never hear from again

All these fucked up things

Keep us torn apart

Your broken wings

And my sewn up heart

Right now I miss you so much

But what's happened, has happened

And we can't turn it back

The darkness descends

It's getting cold...Again

Reviews

[AlieahRose]

THIS IS RAW...
I LOVE IT...
JOB WELL DONE...

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. oh, that's a million punches in my stomach ... brilliantly written ... poignant and powerful ... intense beyond measure ... amazing poetry ...

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very emotional read!

[Gone]

I can so feel the pain in this one. In fact I find it so overwhelming all I can do is pray.

[Norma M Sutton]

I'm so glad I never took up drinking. What a sad happenstance

[Stef Outsiders]

This is tense and full of feeling, there is sadness and anguish as well. Most have been there, even me. Great piece though...

[Dushyant Thadani]

Its really interesting, the way you showed your emotions about the way your love left you. It was told from the bottom of your heart, and it was a melancholy too. Great job Jeff.

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wow, this is full of emotion, heart felt and so sad.
but a great poem